Kia Ora. I am a Year 6 student in Te Kauru at Paparore School. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Thursday, October 31, 2019
my slide
Once upon a time on a dark fool moon night there was a boy named Jeff. Jeff was going to sleep on the couch because he wanted to stay up all night. When it was midnight the squeaky door opened and closed over and over again. Jeff got up and closed the door it kept opening and closing.So Jeff got up and closed the door.when he got up to get a drink of water that was in the kitchen. When he walked into the kitchen he fault a wall of engey fly in to his face then he saw a ghost go up the steers into the room. Jeff cooled into a ball on the couch. Lackey it was day time and the ghost flies away into the orange clouds.
WALT we are learning to write creative,scary narratives.
the best part was righting the story and using
can you do this
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