under the bed

WALT We are learning to use descriptive vocab in our wiring

this is work I have writing and edited myself. It is still in progress

have you did a made up story like this

the hard part about my story is that I had one photo we had to

The boy under the bed

 The was lying on his bed his bed looking at the bright sunset
throw the window. Then his mum came in to turn off the lights
to go to bed the sun was still up. He had fill asleep when down
steers someone opened the front door, he did not know that the
door had opened really loud and they still did not hear the
people that came into the house. There were three people
wanted to break in her house and still everything they owned.
Then the boy woke up and head a big crack then he head a

crack again and again getting louder and louder until his door
open a man walk in and grabbed all the things he touched and
the boy run under the bed with his teddy and the man grabed


the blacky and ran down the steps as fast as he can and he
did not see a step and he criped down the sterps and made a