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Friday, September 14, 2018

Koro and the Taniwha


The taniwha chased koro. so koro grabbed the paddle and pushed. Koro did not know want was going on. The taniwha want crazy with the paddle in has mouth.

The taniwha chased koro, so koro grabbed the paddle and pushed. Koro did not know what was going on. The taniwha went crazy with the paddle in has mouth.????
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  1. Miss FarrOctober 30, 2018 at 9:34 AM

    Kia ora Kaiden,
    What an interesting story! I love the way you used punctuation to add extra detail. What was this story about? Will there be another part to it?
    Nga mihi,
    Miss Farr

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