Movie making

 IN my class our teacher said we can make movie

but in groups. so Kaiden,

Isaac.Kahi,Donnie and Damon.

We were getting in to it we

are nearly finished all we need

to do is do the

scenes for then we will be finished.

In will post it on my blog when

we are finished making it.

WALT We are learning to right a good speach

This is whats been helping us write my class speeches. this is youtube our teacher found it for us learn about this 

WALT were are learning

Blaze of Fortnite was so sweaty

that no one can find it because

it was so rare from when it came

out in season 1. Being the sweats

and rares in Fortnite means she has

to practise all  the time. He's better

than the people that were in the in

the world cup and his name was

bugha he won the world cup in 

2019. He was the best so won million

dollars because he won it with a big

lead by 10 points.

His friends and family were so proud

of him. So he loved playing Fortnite

and went up in the history book for

the goal that he got. He goes up against

the best players in fortnite.

kaiden sestina poem

WALT- We are learning to write a Poem using the Sestina format. 

Poem #4 A Sestina

Each postcard will form one stanza [one part] of a sestina [whole poem].

Think of a specific journey. Long, short, special, everyday, real or fake.

Write six lines about that journey each with only six words, using the following writing prompts.

• Something you saw.
• Something you remember.
• A person who was with you.
• A wonderful imagined thing that didn’t actually happen
• The reason for your journey.
• Your own six word sentence.

Big tsunami coming it scares me	Path - Ara
It's going to destroy my home	Hopara - Explore/sightseeing
I ran off with my bike	Haerenga - Journey
It chased me down the Street	Taunga - position
It kept coming at me fast	Mahere - map
Woke up in a big house	Wahi - place

✓✓ Task completed  

Poem #4 A Sestina

Each postcard will form one stanza [one part] of a [sestina whole poem].

Think of a specific journey. Long, short, special, everyday, real or fake.

Write six lines about that journey each with only six words,

using the following writing prompts.

• Something you saw.
• Something you remember.
• A person who was with you.
• A wonderful imagined thing that didn’t actually happen
• The reason for your journey.
• Your own six word sentence.

Big tsunami coming it scares me	Path - Ara
It's going to destroy my home	Hopara - Explore/sightseeing
I ran off with my bike	Haerenga - Journey
It chased me down the Street	Taunga - position
It kept coming at me fast	Mahere - map
Woke up in a big house	Wahi - place

✓✓ Task completed

Kaidens sick sentences

WALT, we are learning to collect data from a sheet and record it on a table 

The Mad Hatter  

Sick sentences!

These sentences are ‘sick’ and need help to get better. 

Can you help?

[Add to the sentences to make them make sense and check the spelling]

The Mad Hatter stared.

He had big eyes and red hair. 

He wore a hat.

His skin was white. 

✓✓ Task completed

His breath stank.

He had a sick face.

He had a cool dance, His nerves can get mad fast.

He was good with the sword.

He loved to throw his hat.

He wore a lot of makeup.

He never changed his clothes.

He tastes makeup whenever he opens his mouth.

He wanted to dance with the queen.

He had an amazing dance for her.

His hair tastes like candy floss.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

kaiden thunder

Last night on wednesday there was a lot of thunder tumbling on the roof. It sounded like a really really big shelf had fallen from the moon. I got up and looked out the window and a 

Lightning shone right into the room and it gave me a humongous fright. So I circled back up into my blanket and tried to go back to sleep but the thunder and lightning cepet lighting up the room and I couldn't go back to sleep so I just kept looking out the window and the lightning kept coming back.so I tried to listen to the tv but the thunder was to loud. 

my slide

Once upon a time on a dark fool moon night there was a boy named Jeff. Jeff was going to sleep on the couch because he wanted to stay up all night. When it was midnight the squeaky door opened and closed over and over again. Jeff got up and closed the door it kept opening and closing.So Jeff got up and closed the door.when he got up to get a drink of water that was in the kitchen. When he walked into the kitchen he fault a wall of engey fly in to his face then he saw a ghost go up the steers into the room. Jeff cooled  into a ball on the couch. Lackey it was day time and the ghost flies away into the orange clouds.







WALT we are learning to write creative,scary narratives.

the best part was righting the story and using

can you do this